Dark, without life and with nobody
One day somebody came and gave life and
Earth was created by God
Ugly as a crocodile
Beutiful as a bird
Earth was created by God
Every morning that i wake up the tree looks at me
Flowers saying good morning
Earth was created by God
5 comments:
Your poem is good but it dosent have all the Rubric need it.
Carla, this poem are good, I like all the thingd you put in your poem....=) Good work....;)
Your poem is good but it dosent have all the Rubric need it.
I like how you interpret your own writing styles by using metaphor
very good job
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